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Remarks
Remark 1:
Please check whether your mean “biological catalysts.”Remark 2:
Please check the English word choice change made in this instance.Remark 3:
Do you mean that they also catalyze the aminotransferase activity “of the ribosome”? If yes, then please add this text in the sentence.Remark 4:
Please check if the edited text conveys your intended meaning.Remark 5:
In this instance, do you mean “reactions”?Explanations
[Explanation1]: Punctuation:
Because this is a question, a comma has been used to indicate a pause.
[Explanation2]: Grammar:
The definite article “the” has been added here to denote a specific event.
[Explanation3]: Grammar:
Here, the author is speaking of two major events “discovery of ribozymes” and “RNA world hypothesis.” There are two subjects; thus, the verb should be plural, i.e., “have.”
[Explanation4]: Language:
“Another” has been replaced with a formal word “different.”
[Explanation5]: Word choice:
From the aesthetic viewpoint, it is better to use the plural form of “enzyme.” Accordingly, the verb has been made plural.
[Explanation6]: Subject-related word choice:
Note that in a normal edit, better technical words are suggested to the author through a remark.
[Explanation7]: Grammar:
Note that preposition usage has been revised for accuracy.
[Explanation8]: Language:
“Biochemical” is the more appropriate adjectival form than “biochemic.”
[Explanation9]: Accuracy:
Names of scientists have been revised for accuracy.
[Explanation10]: Syntax The text has been edited for orderly flow of information and better readability.
[Explanation11]: Grammar:
The plural possessive determiner has been used for clarity.
[Explanation12]: Wordiness:
Unnecessary words have been deleted for economical expression.
[Explanation13]: Word Choice:
A revision has been made because the word “isolated” is formal.
[Explanation14]: Word Choice:
To maintain the academic tone of the manuscript, changing has been revised to “converting.”
[Explanation15]: Readability and Clarity:
"t-RNA" has been repeated for clarity and readability.
[Explanation16]: Grammar:
A hyphen has been added here because ‘reform’ and ‘re-form’ differ in meaning, and adding a hyphen here is conveys the intended meaning accurately.
[Explanation17]: Technical Word Choice:
A context-based word choice revision has been made accuracy among the technical terms within a document.
[Explanation18]: Word Choice:
The accurate word has been used to convey the intended meaning.
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Explanations
[Explanation1]: Punctuation:
Because this is a question, a comma has been used to indicate a pause.[Explanation2]: Grammar:
The definite article “the” has been added here to denote a specific event.[Explanation3]: Technical word Choice:
Note that “RNA world hypothesis” is the appropriate technical word.[Explanation4]: Grammar:
Here, the author is speaking of two major events “discovery of ribozymes” and “RNA world hypothesis.” There are two subjects; thus, the verb should be plural, i.e., “have.”[Explanation5]: Language:
“Another” has been replaced with a formal word “different.”[Explanation6]: Language:
For better flow and transition, the phrase has been placed at the beginning of the sentence.[Explanation7]: Word choice:
From the aesthetic viewpoint, it is better to use the plural form of “enzyme.” Accordingly, the verb has been made plural.[Explanation8]: Subject-related technical enhancement:
Note that “biological catalysts” is the more appropriate technical word.[Explanation9]: Word Choice:
“Molecules” is the preferred formal word choice.[Explanation10]: Language:
“Biochemical” is the more appropriate adjectival form than “biochemic.”[Explanation11]: Accuracy:
Names of scientists have been revised for accuracy.[Explanation12]: Flow and Transition:
The sentence has been edited for orderly flow of information and better readability.[Explanation13]: Accuracy:
The appropriate symbol has been used consistently to adhere to the accurate spelling of the name.[Explanation14]: Wordiness:
A substantive edit ensures verbose expressions are presented in the most concise and simplified form.[Explanation15]: Word Choice:
Note that the word choice has been revised for readability.[Explanation16]: Flow and Transition:
This revision has been made to ensure a logical structure and orderly flow of information within the text.[Explanation17]: Word Choice:
A revision has been made because the word “isolated” is formal.[Explanation18]: Word Choice:
To maintain the academic tone of the manuscript, changing has been revised to “converting.”
[Explanation19]: Subject-related technical enhancement:
"Stimulate" has been revised to "catalyze" because it is technically more appropriate this context.
[Explanation20]: Clarity:
"Active" has been added for clarity related to the subject matter.
[Explanation21]: Technical Word Choice:
A context-based word choice revision has been made accuracy among the technical terms within a document.
[Explanation22]: Clarity:
The sentence has been edited to improve its structure for better readability.
[Explanation23]: Technical word choice:
“Substrates” is the appropriate technical word in this context.
[Explanation24]: Word Choice:
“Reactions” is the correct English word choice in this instance.
[Explanation25]: Word choice:
Awkward terms have been revised for readability.
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