Finanças Corporativas, Exemplos de Revisão

Exemplo de Revisão: Finanças Corporativas

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  • Manuscrito original

    Finanças Corporativas, Exemplos de Revisão

    Manuscrito revisado

    Finanças Corporativas, Exemplos de Revisão

    Remarks

    Remark 1:
    Note that the highlighted text was unclear. We have edited the sentences to the best of our understanding. Please check whether the edit conveys your intended meaning.

    Explanations

    [Explanation1]: Language:
    Adding this introductory phrase sets the academic tone of the document and improves the flow of the subsequent information.

    [Explanation2]: Word choice:
    “Price” is a more appropriate word choice in this context.

    [Explanation3]: Typographical error and capitalization:
    The spelling error and incorrect capitalization have been corrected.

    [Explanation4]: Language:
    An advance edit ensures that correct terms are used and the sentence structure is made concise while maintaining the meaning.

    [Explanation5]: Language:
    A transition word has been introduced here to ensure a logical flow of ideas. Also, “in reality” has been placed in the appropriate part of the sentence, thus eliminating ambiguity.

    [Explanation6]: Grammar:
    The revision has been made for appropriate word choice and subject-verb agreement.

    [Explanation7]: Language:
    “Wrong” is a better word choice than “bad” in this instance.

    [Explanation8]: Language:
    An advance edit condenses lengthy/verbose phrases, thus making the sentence concise.

    [Explanation9]: Attention to Detail:
    The unnecessary space within the numbers of a value and that between the numeral and percentage symbol have been deleted. In addition, the spaces surrounding the en dash have also been deleted.

    [Explanation10]: Punctuation:
    A hyphen has inserted between “profit” and “taking.”

    [Explanation11]: Grammar:
    The missing verb “is” has been added.

    [Explanation12]: Word choice:
    “Treated” is the preferred word choice.

    [Explanation13]: Word choice:
    “Maximize” is the appropriate word choice in this instance.

    [Explanation14]: Grammar:
    The demonstrative adjective “these” (plural) has been used in accordance with the plural noun “limits.”

    [Explanation15]: Punctuation:
    The ellipses have been replaced with the correct punctuation mark, i.e., the period.

    [Explanation16]: Language:
    This sentence has been reconstructed in keeping with correct grammar (use of articles), word choices, and sentence structure. Thus the sentence is now distinct in meaning and concise in structure. A remark has been added for the author to verify the changes.

    [Explanation17]: Language:
    The tense of this sentence has been corrected, and the formal and appropriate word “frequent” has been added.

    [Explanation18]: Attention to detail:
    The unnecessary hyphen between the two words has been deleted.

    [Explanation19]: Grammar:
    The plural form “investors” has been used for grammatical correctness.

    [Explanation20]: Attention to detail:
    Uppercase letter has been changed to lowercase.

    [Explanation21]: Punctuation:
    The missing comma has been inserted to set off “in contrast.”

    [Explanation22]: Attention to detail:
    The missing period has been added here.

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