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Explanations
[Explanation1]: Word choice:
Choosing the right word to convey meaning eases readability and understanding. “Cater” is a more appropriate word in this context.
[Explanation2]: Typographical error:
The spelling error has been corrected here.
[Explanation3]: Style:
In academic writing, when the value is expressed in numerals, the abbreviation of the corresponding unit should be used.
[Explanation4]: Word choice:
Choosing the right words to convey meaning enhances readability and understanding.
[Explanation5]: Style:
Generally, the abbreviations need to be defined at the first instance in both the abstract and the text.
[Explanation6]: Language:
In academic writing, information is presented with accuracy and conciseness. Formal, precise language is a hallmark of academic English.
[Explanation7]: Grammar:
The plural verb “are” is used as it agrees with the plural noun “antennas.”
[Explanation8]: Attention to detail:
“rf” has been lowercased for consistency.
[Explanation9]: Style:
In American English, the nonrestrictive clause is mostly introduced with the relative pronoun “that.”
[Explanation10]: Grammar:
The adverb has been appropriately placed for fluent readability.
[Explanation11]: Punctuation:
Because “hence” is the introductory phrase here, a comma must be inserted.
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Manuscrito original
Manuscrito revisado
Explanations
[Explanation1]: Attention to detail:
The revision has been made for style consistency.
[Explanation2]: Word choice:
Choosing the right word to convey meaning eases readability and understanding. “Cater” is a more appropriate word in this context.
[Explanation3]: Typographical error:
The spelling error has been corrected here.
[Explanation4]: Style:
In academic writing, when the value is expressed in numerals, the abbreviation of the corresponding unit should be used.
[Explanation5]: Language:
Matching and clearly stating what qualities or entities are being compared makes your content reader-friendly. Here “providing” has been changed to “provide” to make the verb parallel with “achieve.”
[Explanation6]: Attention to detail:
“RF” has been uppercased for consistency.
[Explanation7]: Grammar:
“A” has been added because “radio link” is a singular, countable noun.
[Explanation8]: Grammar:
The plural verb “are” is used as it agrees with the plural noun “antennas.”
[Explanation9]: Word Choice:
A better, more concise word choice has been added here.
[Explanation10]: Grammar:
Note that “data” is the plural form of the noun “datum.” Hence, we have revised the pronoun to “these.”
[Explanation11]: Style:
In American English, the nonrestrictive clause is mostly introduced with the relative pronoun “that.”
[Explanation12]: Grammar:
The adverb has been appropriately placed for fluent readability.
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