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Comment [Crimson1]: Capitalization: Since “Hall” is the name of a person, it should be capitalized. The revision has been made throughout the paper for consistency.
Comment [Crimson2]: Readability:Better sentence construction for readability.
Comment [Crimson3]: Academic language: “In addition” is a formal word choice widely used in academic writing.
Comment [Crimson4]: Punctuation:In academic writing, contractions are discouraged.
Comment [Crimson5]: Word choice:The incorrect word choice has been corrected.
Comment [Crimson6]: Grammar:
In the passive voice, adverbs of manner are generally placed between the helping and main verbs or after the verb phrase.
Comment [Crimson7]: Typographical error: Corrected
Comment [Crimson8]: Style: In American English, the relative pronoun “that” is used to introduce restrictive clauses.
Comment [Crimson9]: Language enhancement: Redundant phrases make a sentence wordy. Being economical in writing enhances clarity of meaning and readability of the sentence.
Comment [Crimson10]: Grammar: The singular count noun “graphene” requires a singular verb, and hence the revision.
Comment [Crimson11]: Grammar:
In a list starting with "such as" or "including," the use of "etc" and "and so on" is redundant
Comment [Crimson1]: Flow & Clarity of information/content: Content has been shifted here improve clarity and make a strong introduction.
Comment [Crimson2]: Flow & transition: For fluent readability and coherence, a transition word has been added here.
Comment [Crimson3]: Language enhancement: This change has been made to eliminate redundancy and economical expression.
Comment [Crimson4]: Grammar: The singular count noun “structure” requires a determiner; hence, the indefinite article has been added.
Comment [Crimson5]: Academic tone + Language enhancement: The word “unlikely” has been used instead of “there are very few chances” for a formal tone. Formal language is a hallmark of academic English.
Comment [Crimson6]: Sentence reconstruction: Change in syntax for clarity and readability.
Comment [Crimson7]: Subject-related technical enhancement: This clause has been revised for clarity in technical content.
Comment [Crimson8]: Grammar: Since specific edge states are being referred here, the definite article is necessary.
Comment [Crimson9]: Language correctness: The words “also” and “in addition” convey the same meaning; hence, using both the words in this context makes the sentence redundant.
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